Question: We should look to the mind, and not to the outward appearance. Do you agree with this statement? Refer to the text and the real world in support of your answer.
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“First appearance deceives many.” said Ovid, a Roman poet. It is inevitably the first impression someone makes of one which lasts. Unfortunately, this first impression is often based on outward appearances and is bound to interfere and change how a person interacts with one. One is usually judged by his appearance and is taken for granted by the other that his character corresponds to his appearances. However, this is not always the case and a person should not be assessed based on his looks, but on the basis of his character and thinking.
“First appearance deceives many.” said Ovid, a Roman poet. It is inevitably the first impression someone makes of one which lasts. Unfortunately, this first impression is often based on outward appearances and is bound to interfere and change how a person interacts with one. One is usually judged by his appearance and is taken for granted by the other that his character corresponds to his appearances. However, this is not always the case and a person should not be assessed based on his looks, but on the basis of his character and thinking.
ReplyDeleteThere are valid ideas here but your grammatical errors hinders my ability to understand.
ReplyDeleteYou are NOT talking about the 'mind' at all. This shows rote-learning from previously learned or discussed material without applying to the question.